Simple rules to follow if you want to write effectively:
- Active not passive sentence. Put the doer first. Example: “I am eating the apple” not “Apple is being eaten by me”.
- A sentence of around 8 words is ideal. Around 16 words is good. Sentences beyond 30 words should just not be an option.
- Short paragraphs.
- Use free grammar. Check online resources such as https://www.grammarcheck.net/editor/
- Refer to this PDF to convert passive sentences into active sentences.